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Comic Strip

24 Jan

Family Day a

Family Day b

– Why did you choose the different pictures or background(s)?
I choose different pictures and backgrounds to enhance the image i want to convey to the readers. Example: I used a background of the sunset to convey to the readers that the characters are watching the sunset.

– How do they contribute to the elements (plot, setting, characterization) of your narrative?
The background sunset contributed to the setting as a happy day yet sad farewell to the lovely beach as the family leaves the beach for their home.

– How did you make use of the different elements to contribute to the theme you have chosen?
I used dialogues to contribute to the theme. Example is the dialogue in the last box. Tom wanted to go to the beach again because he treasures the family bonding he has with his family and he wants to get closer to his family members.

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5 Comments

Posted by on January 24, 2011 in Uncategorized

 

5 responses to “Comic Strip

  1. Darrel

    February 2, 2011 at 3:21 am

    I feel that your comic strip is a bit too simple with no moral of the story etc. However, there is one thing which is good about it. Your comic strip is very colourful and it attracts me to want to look at it more. If your comic strip were to be more interesting, it would be perfect!

     
    • Mrs. Anu

      February 5, 2011 at 11:13 am

      Who is this?

       
  2. Tseng Chun Yi

    February 2, 2011 at 3:30 am

    Well done Wen Feng!! Your comic is brilliant but it will be even better if you could add a little bit of feeling into the storyline. Think through the following questions:
    1) Why did the boy want to go to the beach again
    Is it because his family didn’t have the chance to go for a family outing because of his parents’ hectic schedule or is it that the boy simply enjoyed the the outing?
    If you choose suggestion number 1 I believe that it would add some marks and taste to your story. It is just like adding margarine or honey onto a plain toast. The underlying message can evoke peoples’ feeling and have a even better impression of the comic.
    I still feel that it is very well done with the striking colour and background. Hope my comment helps!! 🙂
    CHUN YI

     
    • Mrs. Anu

      February 5, 2011 at 11:13 am

      Good input Chun Yi

       
  3. Lim Wei Yang

    February 7, 2011 at 12:06 pm

    what is the theme or message in the comic? there is no indication that the comic has a message. That said, your comic is well drawn and attractive.
    Good try!!

     

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